We brainstormed the feedback of how we would improve our 25 word pitch. Feedback provided by fellow class members and teachers,all of who have understanding and knowledge of what is required from the pitch.The next stage from here is to put this is to alter our old pitch and develop into something which takes into account the suggestions from others.
Girls, this is a good idea for a post, take a look at Molly Simpsons reflection post and try and add this level of detail to your blog.
ReplyDeleteA great idea for EVERY post (if you're aiming for an A) is to reflect on
what you've learnt
what you can use in your video
what you can't use in your video (because of cost, time, lack of skill, suitability etc)
what you will be doing next
The group doesnt appear to be working well enough at the moment. The 22 posts have been posted as follows:
ReplyDeleteSophie Beeston 9 posts
Lauren Roberts 7 posts
Lauren Bolton 4 posts
Sophie Callanan 2 posts
If any posts are collaborative efforts then you need to add the relevant group names to the labels. This will show Mr Smith and I who has been involved in that post (and the work it contains).
Sophie B. and Lauren R., you are both working reasonably well at the moment. Lauren B. although you've only posted 4 times and seemingly done nothing for a while, your posts are very detailed. You do need to up your work rate and start posting much more. Sophie C. you need to actually do some work. What you have contributed so far isn't to A2 standard at all.
We need to see the necessary improvements by Friday (19th) this week.